Saturday, January 22, 2011

AGONY OF THE CAPTAIN'S DAUGHTER -- CAPT AJIT VADAKAYIL


This piece is for future poets who want to carve a niche for themselves on this planet. 

Poetry is the flow of intense thoughts— otherwise it is NOT poetry.  

It need not rhyme , unless you are writing it as a nursery rhyme for little children to sing along.  Once you start reading poetry you will NOT be able to stop.  And finally when you do stop, you will feel something inside your heart— if it is good poetry.  


Love and nostalgia take very little effort to make that impact. 

Gone are the days of Victorian bombardment. An ordinary man on the street can write good poetry. Good poetry means 90% of the people both erudite and illiterate who read it will be impressed. 

The remaining 10% misanthropes of this planet , who need something other than poetry to get impressed, please excuse.


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THIS IS A TRUE STORY -----

ma, it has started snowin' outside
and it's cold and windy on deck
rohit has been chipping since morning
he's covered with snow and wet with spray
ma-- why should he be workin' outside
when everybody else is warm and cosy inside

darlin', he has been punished by the mate
for doing something , he shouldn't have done

( she runs to the day room and confronts her father )

dad, give orders NOW to stop this punishment!
darling, he's all right , dont you worry like this
sailors are tough, they can handle this weather
dad, what type of captain are you?
i am ashamed of you-- no-- stay away from me

( upset, she runs up to the bridge and confronts the mate )

uncle, why are you punishing poor rohit so?
cant you see he is not properly clothed?
he might fall sick-- why-- he might even die!

( her big blue eyes are now brimming with tears )

beti, i will tell him to come back as soon as it gets dark

( the tears dry up suddenly-- her eyes flash fire )

mr. mate-- don't you ever "beti" me again
I'm going on deck and taking him inside the mast house
my woolen skirt will cover us both
my warm body will thaw his frozen fingers

tell ma, not to look for me till it is dark!


CAPT AJIT VADAKAYIL
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( Young 17 year old Cadet Rohit, was being punished by the Mate with Captain's permission. The mate was livid, as he had barged into the sauna room, where he and his newly wedded wife were making love in the steam. Rohit should have seen the slippers outside, it was deemed to be deliberate. The captains 15 year old half Russian daughter was totally infatuated with the cadet and decides to rebel )



5 comments:

  1. very nice one sir.

    during adolescence why we tend to fall in so called love very easily. is it due to the fact that our hormones are very active during puberty period .

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    1. hi ns,

      sex is PURE and god given-it involves the MIND.

      in the west the men requires the woman to apply vacuum using mouth or manipulation using hand job. this is BYPASSING THE MIND.

      sex after such physical manipulation by CHEATING THE MIND is not PURE.

      prudes will NOT understand what i meant.

      capt ajit vadakayil
      ..

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  2. The depths of heart are unknown.
    If it is hurt it has no cure.

    Only the resonance of love may make it sing again.
    But the The broken strings are still missing.

    (Dunno y this piece got erased twice.
    and now i forgot it. lets say divine gesture)

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  3. hi sir
    INDIA ON LEASE FOR 99YRS
    Recently I was hearing the recording of Rajiv Dixit, a very famous nationalist .. i heard he said, in the Transfer of power agreement 1947, which was signed between Nehru-Mountbatten for Indian-Independence.. It is mention that, india will be member of commonwealth dominion for 99 years and no law made by british would be amenable or removable.. ? Not only that, Queen of UK is head of state above president of INDIA by rank…. such that, she do not require Passport / Visa to enter in INDIA…… The final decision of Independence from Dominion status would be decided after the or during the end of this 99 years of agreement. ?…..

    Becoz, of this and many other such laws-agreement many of PM failed to perform independently to UK …. and Even if supreme court – if wish to make any decision for which if there is nothing in law of INDIA. Take reference to if any of decision UK court made on this… to make it as part to Indian Judgement. …
    all the judgements passed by judiciary is in English language as opposed to national language hindi
    article 147 states Indian constitution it clearly says that if Privy council which is the supreme court of UK makes any amendments in Indian independence act 1947 or in government of indian act 1935. Indian supreme court will have to obey those amendments.
    in video Rajiv dixit also claims that queen of England is above president of India then pm in hierarchy
    he aslo states that during ik gujral period when he opposed queen visiting
    jalianwalabagh day in Punjab ik gujral states that even he cannot stop queen frm visiting India
    he further states that Pakistan is supposed to small dominion state of India

    CAPT PLZ DONT JUDGE ME FOR ASKING THIS DOUBT IAM DESHBHAKT LIKE YOU MY HEART BROKE WHEN I FIRST HEARD THIS ON THE VIDEO .IS RAJIV DIXIT TRUE? , INDIA IS GOING TO CELEBRATE ITS 70YRS SO PLZZZ CLARIFY MY DOUBT SIR

    https://youtu.be/kTcyu-wPYOg

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  4. AGAIN SIR PLZZZ CLARIFY THE DOUBT ON INDIA ON LEASE 99YRS BY RAJIV DIXIT?

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